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Monday, 25 June 2012

Oringinal Film Noir Script


Table scene:                                                                Beautiful Stranger
(Blair and Karren are sitting opposite each other at the dinner table, with Blair on Andrews left and Karren on his right)
(Blair makes no eye contact with Andrew what so ever, as this may give away anything to Karren about Andrew and Blairs relationship)
Blair: (looks up at Karren) this dinner is lovely.
Karren: (looks up to Blair directly in the eyes) Thank you.
Andrew: so what is it that your husband does? (asks Blair as cluelessly)
Blair: He’s a private investigator.
Karren: That’s handy, very hand (says this slowly as she objectifies Blair)
Blair: One might think so (laughs)
Andrew: (scoffs) And what is it that you do?
Blair: I’m a waitress (whilst cutting her food which she slowly puts in her mouth)
Andrew: That’s all most like what my wife does but you get paid and she does it for free(laughs as hes made a joke about her job being similiar to his wifes-may offend)
Andrew: Do you and your husband have any children?
Blair: No, not yet.
Karren: Me and my husband have been trying to have children for a very long time now, when it happens it’ll happen (seems saddened by this, looks at Andrew and places her hand on his and looks down)
Andrew: Not now woman!
(Karren gives an awkward smile, pushing away from Andew)
Karren: (indirectly) are you anjoying this Blair?
Blair: (looks confused as to what Karren is implying) umm, the dinner? Yes like I said before, it is lovely.
Andrew: stop coming on so stro-o-o-o-ng....(chokes and callopses)
(Both Karren and Blair step out of their seats to side with Anderew)
Karren: (screeches) Oh sweet lord! What have I done.... YOU! (points at Karren, her voice slowly starts to raise up) that plate was meant for YOU! I put the poison in there for YOU! And now my husband is dead because of YOU! You commited adultrey with my husband and thought I didn’t know? Hmm? I befriended you, YOU witch, to put you straight. And now(chokes up) I am left a widow because of YOU! That should of have been you dead not him!
(looks away at the table, sees the knife in sight, grabs it in an instant, raises her arm up, goes in to stab Blair)
(Shadow projects this and Blair falls to the floor)
(A sense of relief, Karren smiles to herself, when there is a sudden knock on the door)
Karren: Who is it? (worried and tense, Karren begins to panic)
Bill: It’s me, Bill, open up I have something to tell you.
Karren: (opens the door, she begins to smile and begins to relax) I-I-I-I-I-I .... Bill...look(points over at the 2 bodies that lay there) he betrayed me Bill, Andrew, he betrayed me and her, your wife, she’s a whore Bill. Bill, I’m so sorry.
Bill: Oh Karren, it’s okay.. for I love you Karren
Karren: I love you too Bill.
Karren: with them two gone we can be together, we’ll run away and live in peace.
(Bill pulls Karren closer to him, they hug and close up of this pans out)
(End scene)

Scene 2:         The Encounter:                                                       Beautiful Stranger


(Bill gradually walks to Andrews’s front door, emotionally raged and feeling optimistic. He reaches for the door bell when suddenly the door swings wide open.)


Bill: uh..hehello

Karren: Oh hello, you are?

Bill: I’m a boat salesman ma’am

Karren: Oh I see, would you like to come in?

Bill: yes of course, that would be nice

(Bill walks into the house and into the living room, being directed by Karren. She initiates a hand signal at the sofa, where he sits down.)

Karren: My husband deals with things like this you see but I definitely find this interesting. I was on my way out actually (takes of coat) so I’m glad I caught you. Otherwise nobody would of answered.

Bill: (tries to show he’s interested in the conversation)

Karren: would you like anything to eat? We haven’t got much food; I was going out for grocery shopping you see.

Bill: No, nothing, water would be nice actually

Karren: oh okay. Make yourself at home! (she shouts as she walks from the living room to the kitchen)

Bill: you have a lovely home (says as he objectifies everything in the room, closely observing the picture frames that lye so effortlessly on the shelf)

Karren: Ah why thank you Mr! I’m always telling Andrew: my husband, get this done, get that done. Always trying to have my home to perfection (says this happily with a vague smile on her face, re entering the room)

Bill: And does he?

Karren: (laughs) you can see that for yourself

(They both smile at each other for a moment because personally the know that individually, they have not laughed in a very long time)



 Bill: I’m sorry to have disturbed you (suddenly puts down his glass and jumps out of his seat)

Karren: (stands up shaking her head) no it’s fine honestly….

Bill: …no it was wrong of me to just come into your home like this, I do apologise. I must go

Karren: but you didn’t even show me any boats yet? (laughs nervously)

Bill: I’ll come back… yes next Thursday will you be home?

Karren: indeed I will, nothing much round here to do for a housewife

Bill: then I shall see you on Thursday

(Bill opens the door but looks back at Karren and gives her a gracious smile)

Bill: goodbye

Karren: goodbye!

(End scene)

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